Critique of A Trip to Venice by Cyber Art Leaning Painting Critiques

Samples of Critiques

A Trip to Venice

The Learning Gallery: A Trip to Venice

Strong Points

The texture of the stones in the real scene can be overwhelming to paint. You managed to simplify this and it still tells us there are stones.
There is a nice feeling of depth.
The perspective is true.
The blue and red clothing on the figure helps the main subject stand out.
The colored buildings at the center invite to row in and follow the boat.
The water has a nice feeling to it because the ripples make the water look like it's moving.

The image to the left are electronically enhanced copies, with the suggestions of the critiquers incorporated directly into the image.

Specific comments are below.

Areas to work on:

Avoid placing the main subject of your painting in the center. I cropped the original painting in order to place the subject to the side. Also it is more interesting since the two walls don't look like a mirror image.

I think you are mixing your colors too much on the palette. If you mix them right on the canvas instead you will get more color variety and make those gray areas more alive. I simulated this electronically. There is a hint of change of colors on the two walls. I didn't want exaggerate this because I
wanted to stick more closely to your original color feeling.